Major Speech 1

Personally I believe that I did excellent on this first speech. This is one assignment that I actually had put time into, and was very proud of my work. I guess the one thing that I could have done less of was sentence fillers. I found myself saying "um" quite a bit. One aspect that I think that I will need to fix is not only like what I said about sentence filler, but I also just kind of need my slides to flow together better. I guess to do better next I will just work harder.